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Crappy Dialogue

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NaNoFail of the Day~ My crappy, robotic dialogue between the priests in my post apocalyptic novel.  Only slightly bested by my complete ignorance of Catholicism.  Who’s idea was it to hole up my protagonist in a cathedral anyway?  Oh yeah!  I remember!  My dumb ass.  Well, 1st drafts always suck so I suppose I am on par for the course.

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About Lore Wilde

Writer of horror and flash fiction, student, fast pitch softball mom. Lover of the internet and the gym (strange combo). Always on Spotify jamming out, on a nature trail, in the water, on a trip, cooking, writing, at a live concert, exercising, yoga, meditiating. Prone to sarcastic rants, telling ghost stories, bitching about money or having perpetual fun. Interested in hanging out with creative, kewl people with stories to share. I adore writers...professional, published, or "just for fun". I read a lot, write a lot, and type faster than Hell burns.

One response to “Crappy Dialogue

  1. Hi Lore….Just from what you said in this post, I see the protagonist holed up in a deserted, falling down, haunted cathedral where he is confronted by mummified priest creature things. Sorry. I got carried away….again. 😦

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